小学生作文习作·给……的一封信　A Letter to…

小学生作文习作·给……的一封信　A Letter to…

给外国朋友的一封信　A Letter to a Foreign Friend

Dear Bob,

I got your letter the day before yesterday. I'm very happy to become your friend. My name is Candy. I'm nine years old. I'm Chinese. I live in Shanghai.

I am a primary school student. I'm good at singing and dancing. They're very interesting. My favourite sport is swimming.

After class, I often skip rope with friends. I like light music because it sounds very nice. In my spare time, I am interested in not only playing Yoyo but also playing badminton.

I hope we'll meet in China soon. At that time, I'll take you to the Jinmao Tower and the Shanghai Museum.

Could you please tell me something about your country next time? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Candy

点评

这是一封书信格式的写作，通过小作者写给一位外国小朋友的信，表现出了整个中国少年儿童乐观积极的童年生活。在她的信中，小作者着重介绍了自己的身份、兴趣爱好和丰富的课余生活。同时，也含蓄地发出了“欢迎你到上海来”的邀请。在书信的最后，小作者进一步表达了希望了解对方的心愿，让人感受到一个渴望友谊、充满求知欲的活泼儿童的形象。信写得很有条理，句子准确，读来朗朗上口。

重点表达

1．I like light music because light music sounds very nice. 我喜欢轻音乐，因为它们很好听。

2．In my spare time, I am interested in not only playing Yoyo but also playing badminton. 在我闲暇时间，我不仅喜欢玩溜溜球，也喜欢打羽毛球。

3．At that time, I'll take you to the Jinmao Tower and the Shanghai museum. 到那时，我会带你去金茂大厦和上海博物馆。

4．I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon. 我期待很快收到你的信。

给日本孩子的信　A Letter to Mutsumi

Dear Mutsumi,

How are you? We haven't seen each other for a long time. I always miss the time we spent together. What a nice day we had at Zhujiajiao!

The weather in Shanghai is warmer now. Spring is coming. Are the cherry trees blossoming in Japan? The photo of cherry trees in Japan that you posted for me is very nice and beautiful. I like it very much. Thanks a lot.

Our first day of summer vacation is July 1st. I hope you can come to Shanghai as soon as you can. So we can stay together again，and I will take you to more interesting places. I can teach you Chinese, and you can teach me Japanese.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Dancy

点评

本文小作者在信中通过回忆引出了一段中日小朋友们美好的友谊。通过书信往来，让我们看见了小作者希望了解异国文化的渴望。除此之外，在信件中还充分体现了小作者热情好客的品格，让人真切感受到中日友谊之花已经开放在两国小朋友的心里。全文布局合理，用词精练。

给妈妈的信　A Letter to Mum

Dear Mum,

I have been to the Changzhou Badminton's Training Center for a week. The weather is very hot here. We train for 4 hours a day. The coach is very strict with us.

The room that we live in is comfortable and the meals are good. The coach asks us to do everything by ourselves. I have some friends here now. We play chess，and cards, and watch television every evening. We are very happy.

I will return in two weeks and I miss you very much. East or west, home is best. I will train harder and I will tell you more when I come home.

Your sincerely,

Alex

点评

本文是一篇书信体，格式规范，条理清晰。第一段作者向妈妈汇报了在基地训练的情况，第二段介绍了小作者出门训练在外的住、食以及丰富多彩的业余生活。最后一段表达了小作者对妈妈及家的思念之情。更可贵的是，在最后，小作者点明了自己出门在外并没有忘记训练任务，让我们看见了一个积极向上的阳光少年的形象。就算不做更多的描写，小作者在训练场上刻苦训练、挥汗如雨的形象仿佛清晰地呈现在我们面前，让我们感动。

重点表达

1．I have been to the Changzhou Badminton Training center for a week. “我来到常州羽毛球训练基地已有一星期了。”这是一句现在完成时态的句型。

have been to 已经去了（某个地方）

the Changzhou Badminton Training center 常州羽毛球训练基地

for a week 一个星期了

2．be strict with 对……严格

3．the coach makes us do everything by ourselves 教练要求我们每件事都自己做 by oneself 自己做……

4．I will return in two weeks. 我将于两星期后回家。

5．East or west home is best. 行遍天下路，还是在家好。

给凯蒂的一封信　A Letter to Kady

Dear Kady,

How are you? I miss you and my friends at school.

This summer holiday, I go to Hawaii. The most wonderful thing about Hawaiian is the temperature of the water and air. For example, the temperature of the water at the famous resort Waikiki is only 23℃. And there is no definite season in Hawaii. People tell me that in Hawaii there is only two or three degree difference between the hottest day in summer and the coldest day in winter. That's why the Hawaiians don't have a word for weather in their language. Perhaps the best thing about Hawaiian for me is the wave. Even long, long ago, people in Hawaii knew how much fun it was to ride waves. They developed bodysurfing—a sport, which is now very popular on the island. You go out into the ocean, wait for big waves to come towards you, jump on it, and ride it all the way to the beach. I really enjoy myself there.

Hope to see you when the new term begins.

Yours,

John

点评

这是一封书信格式的写作，描述了小作者暑期到夏威夷旅游的游后感。小作者挑选令他最感新奇的夏威夷冲浪来写，语句通顺，思想表达清楚简洁。行文突出重点，使读者对他在夏威夷的愉快旅行有很直接和生动的印象。整篇文章写得很有条理，句子准确，读来朗朗上口。

重点表达

1．The most wonderful thing about Hawaiian is the temperature of the water and air. 夏威夷最令我兴奋的是海水和空气的温度。

2．Even long, long ago, people in Hawaii knew how much fun it was to ride waves. 即使是很久很久以前，夏威夷人就知道冲浪有多有趣。