走进大自然
河北省沙河市刘石岗中学:张晶晶
我生在农村,长在农村,从未走出过农村的土地,无缘祖国的名山大川,但我却不为自己的见识浅陋而遗憾,因为家乡的风景是那么优美,她想磁石一般无时无刻不在吸引着我去探索,去发现。
记得小时候我跟着父母下地干活,去地之前,妈妈总会把很多好吃的零食与饮料放在我随身带的小书包里。爸爸妈妈拿着锄头走在前面,我背着小书包跟在后面,又蹦又跳,嘴里还哼着小曲儿。路旁不知名的野花开得绚烂多姿,我不时俯下身子采几朵,凑到鼻子边用力嗅,还扎到自己的羊角小辫上,听到鸟儿的叫声,我会不由自主扒开路边草从,看是否有深藏其中的鸟巢或小鸟……。由于我的“三心二意”,慢慢的就被爸爸妈妈远远落在后面。这时妈妈总会在前方呼唤“快点儿,闺女!再不走,小鬼儿就把你抓走了。”我吓得丢掉手中的花儿,赶上他们,挤在他们中间,一手拉着爸爸,一手拉着妈妈,瞅瞅爸爸,瞧瞧妈妈,有爸妈护着,大鬼我也不怕!
地里就是我的天堂,我瞪着好奇的眼睛打量着眼前的一切。一望无际的麦田,田间辛勤劳作的农民。他们干活累了,站起来舒活腰板,也不说苦,也不说累,因为他们知道辛勤的耕耘后就会迎来新的收获,他们的脸上洋溢着幸福的笑容;我还喜欢坐在地头仔细观察蚂蚁:我在探索“千里之堤,毁于蚁穴”的奥秘,那一堆堆黑色的小不点儿怎么竟有如此巨大的力量来创造一个又一个奇迹?炎炎夏日,知了在树上纵声歌唱,蝴蝶在草丛中翩翩起舞,小蚂蚁却未雨绸缪,默默准备着过冬的食物。当我看到几只蚂蚁通力合作把一个“硕大”的小虫子往洞里搬运的时候,,我为他们的毅力,团结,勤劳,力量而感到震撼。我想到了父亲,想到了和父亲一样在田中耕作的广大农民,虽然他们不起眼,很平凡,但他们不也是靠自己的辛勤劳作把大自然打扮的俏丽多姿,创造着一个个人间奇迹吗?
这就是我美丽的家乡,有新鲜的泥土味,有淳朴的人情味,有愉悦我的眼目的四季美景,有爱我的爸爸妈妈,有憨厚勤劳的乡亲。
我爱大自然,我更爱我的家乡。
这是学生邢台市第一次语文模拟考试的应试作文,这篇习作也许在成人看来,有点儿“小儿科”,但五十多份试卷,一路评析下来,矫揉造作,陈词滥调,无病呻吟,故作深沉之作,陈陈相因,精神倦怠之时,乍读此文,当时却有一种耳目一新,精神为之一震的感觉。两个小时,做题之外,从容行文,语言清新,思路清晰,表达手段娴熟,有描写,有感悟,情景交融,殊为难得。对学生习作,站在教师立场上,不可求全责备。(指导教师:张立日)
Walk into nature
Heibei visits middle school of hillock of stone of Liu of sanded river city: Zhang Jing brilliant
I am born in the country, long be in a country, never had walked out of rural land, without the famous mountains and great rivers of predestined relationship motherland, but the experience that I am not myself however is meager and regretful, because the scenery of home town is so beautiful, she thinks average all the time is not attracting magnetite I go exploring, go discovering.
Write down so that in one's childhood I follow parental go to the fields to work, before going to the ground, mom always is met in the small satchel that puts a lot of delicious snacks and beverage in me to be taken. Father mother is taking hoe to go in front, I am carrying small satchel on the back to follow at the back, skip to jump again again, return in the mouth hum move ditty. Wayside not famous wild flower leaves gorgeously much appearance, I often nutation body collects a few, collect exerts oneself to do sth. to the side of nose smell, on the ovine horn small plait that still plunges into oneself, hear the cry of bird, I can strip off in spite of oneself roadside is careless from, look to whether have hide among them bird's nest or birdie... . As a result of me " half-hearted " , slowly by father mother far left behind. At this moment total meeting forwardly calls mom " quickly, girl! Or else goes, impish catch you. " I am frightened so that desertion the flower in the hand, catch up with them, squeeze in them among, playing father single-handed, playing mother single-handed, look at look at father, look look mom, mom having father is being protected, I also am not afraid of big dirty trick!
My heaven is in the ground, the eye of curiosity of my goggle at is looking everything before up and down. The cornfield of stretch to the horizon, the farmer that field laborious makes with one's shoulder to collar. They work tired, stand up Shu Huo back, also do not say pain, also do not say tired, because they know arduous cultivated hind can greet new results, there is happy smile on their face; I still like to sit in edge of a field to observe ant carefully: I am being explored " the bank of a thousand li, destroy Yu Yi acupuncture point " mystery, how does the very small that piles caboodle black then have so vast power to create unexpectedly another miracle? Sorching summer, even if sound is vocal,cicada is in on the tree, butterfly has dance lightly in brushwood, small ant however against a rainy day, preparing the food of hibernate silently. See when me a few ant give full cooperation " huge " when small insect is carried in past hole, , I am their perseverance, unite, laborious, force and feel a shock. I thought of father, thought of the broad farmer that plows in tanaka with father, although they are ordinary, very ordinary, but they also are not the arduous fatigue that rely on their those who make a nature dress up is handsome much appearance, creating each world miracle?
This is my beautiful home town, have fresh clay taste, have simple the milk of human kindness, have cheerful beautiful scenery of my eye purpose the four seasons, have the father mother that loves me, have simple and honest and laborious villager.
I love nature, I love my native place more.
This is exam of imitate of Chinese of first time of city of student Xing stage should try a composition, this do exercises in composition perhaps looks in the adult, a little " pediatric " , but more than 50 examination paper, judge analyse to come down all the way, affected, truism, make a fuss about an imaginary illness, those who pretend to be dark make, follow a set routine, when spirit is listless, read this article suddenly, however one kind finds everything new and fresh at that time, spirit is the feeling of one of shake. Two hours, become a problem besides, easy style or manner of writing, the language is pure and fresh, clarity of train of thought, expressive method is adept, have picture, have comprehend, the scene blends, different embarrasses. To student do exercises in composition, stand on pedagogic footing, cannot demand perfection is blamed. (tutor: Zhang Li day)