根据英文短诗，写一篇短文：My Teacher Mr Moore

标题为：My Teacher Mr Moore

There's a teacher Mr Moore,

Who is lovely and thirty-four.

Always encouraging us to try,

He leads us to a world of "why".

We all admire him more and more.

注意：1.不得照抄短诗原文;

2.必须结合短诗的内容，发挥想象，适当展开;

3.必须突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语意连贯;

4.短文不能写成诗歌形式;

5.词数120左右。

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(2006·湖南卷)

范文展示

My Teacher Mr Moore

Of all my teachers, Mr Moore is the one who impresses me most. Though he is 34, he looks very young for his age. And he's one of the most popular teachers in our school.

Compared with other teachers, Mr Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching. He tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting. In his opinion, we should not only know "what", but also understand "why". So, instead of giving us an swers immediately, he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions. With his help, we've learned how to analyze and settle problems. What a wonderful world of "why" he leads us to!

He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.

名师点评

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本文考查形式非常新颖，虽然还是考查记叙文写作，但以诗歌的形式提供内容要点，这在高考中并不多见。这首诗中含有以下要点：教师姓名：Mr Moore;教师年龄：thirty-four;教师性格：lovely;教师所作所为：encourage us to try, lead us to a world of "why";学生反应：admire him more and more。

该篇范文分为三部分：第一段介绍老师的姓名、年龄和外貌;第二段介绍老师鼓励我们进入未知世界，并且列举出一些事例，使得内容很充实;第三段是总结段，表达了学生对老师的敬佩、喜爱之情。

本文在语言运用上也有诸多亮点。文章中不但穿插了定语从句、状语从句、感叹句等，还运用了pay attention to, in one's opinion, instead of, put forward, lead to等词组。另外，动词impress, encourage, analyze, admire等也使文章增色不少。

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译文欣赏

我的老师莫尔先生

在我所有的老师中，莫尔老师给我留下的印象最深刻。尽管34岁了，但他看上去比实际年龄年轻得多。他是我们学校最受欢迎的老师之一。

与其他老师相比，莫尔老师更注重教学方法。他用各种方法使他的课堂生动有趣。他认为，我们不仅应该知其然，更应该知其所以然。因此，每当提问题的时候，他不是马上给出答案，而是鼓励我们独立思考。在他的帮助下，我们学会了怎样分析和解决问题。他引导我们进入了一个美妙的“为什么”的世界。

他是一个知识渊博的人，我们都很敬仰他。
 

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英语范文

Mr. Moore, our thirty-four-year-old English teacher, is a true inspiration. His classroom is a place where he encourages us to question and explore, leading us to a world of "why." His enthusiasm is infectious, making learning English an adventure. We admire his ability to make complex grammar and literature accessible and enjoyable. Mr. Moore's dedication to our growth and his genuine interest in our success make him a teacher we all respect and admire.

我的老师摩尔先生

摩尔先生，我们三十四岁的英语老师，是一位真正的鼓舞人心者。他的课堂是一个充满鼓励和探索的地方，引领我们进入一个“为什么”的世界。他的热情极具感染力，使学习英语成为一场冒险。我们钦佩他将复杂语法和文学变得易于理解且有趣的能力。摩尔先生对我们的成长充满奉献，对我们的成功充满真诚的兴趣，使他成为我们所有人心中尊重和钦佩的老师。