请介绍一下你的校园:你们的教室在哪里?你们的图书馆在哪里?你们老师的办公室在哪里?应该怎么走才能到这些地方呢?请简单写一写。(40词以上)
【分析】
作文描述:你们的教室在哪里?你们的图书馆在哪里?你们老师的办公室在哪里?应该怎么走才能到这些地方呢?
思路:
描述校园内容可以包括教师办公室,图书馆,操场等,介绍他们位置,布局;按要求进行书写;运用一般现在时;重点短语:welcome to…、on your right、go straight、on your left、in front of、next to、on the playground。
【解答】
My school
Welcome to my school. Look! The teachers' offices are on your right.And the library is on your left. There are many books in the library. Go straight, and you can see the classrooms on your left. There are many classrooms in our school. In front of the classrooms, there is a little park.It is very beautiful. The playground is next to the park. It's so big. Students often play on the playground. My school is very nice.Do you like it?
欢迎来到我的学校。看!教师办公室在你的右边,图书馆在左边,图书馆里有很多书。直走,你能看到教室在左边。我们学校有很多教室,教室前面有一个小公园,它很漂亮。操场紧挨着公园,它很大,学生们经常在操场上玩。我的学校很棒,你喜欢它吗?
【点评】写作前要分析好写作内容,写作时确保表达的短语及句子结构准确无误,认真完成。
以“My last weekend”为题,写一篇小作文,谈谈你上个周末的活动。
【分析】
本文的写作思路:按时间顺序记叙上个周末的活动。写作时条理一定要清晰,注意时态用一般过去时,可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥,运用自己熟悉的词汇及句型,写作完成后,一定要注意仔细检查。
重点词汇:weekend 周末 mountains 山 pictures 照片
重点句型:
1.We climbed the mountains. 我们爬了山。
2.常用句型:①I felt… 我感到…… ②What do you think of… 你觉得……怎么样?
【解答】
My last weekend
Last Saturday, my parents and I went to the park. First, we watched the flowers. Then, we climbed the mountains. Finally, we flew the kite.In the afternoon, we visited my grandparents. Except me, other family members talked a lot. I played outside. In the evening, we had supper together.
Last Sunday, I cleaned my room. After that, my friends and I went to the zoo to took some pictures. We played happily. And at five o'clock, we went home. I felt tired but happy.
What do you think of my last weekend?
我的上周末
上周六,我和我的父母去了公园。首先,我们看了鲜花;然后,我们爬了山;最后,我们放了风筝。当天下午,我们看望了我的爷爷奶奶。除了我,其他的家人在聊天,而我在外面玩。晚上,我们一起吃了晚饭。
上周日,我打扫了我的房间。之后,我和我的朋友们去动物园拍了一些照片。我们玩得很开心。五点钟,我们回家了,我既感到高兴又感觉疲惫。
你觉得我上个周末怎么样?
你想象中的自然公园是什么样子的?请以“My Nature Park” 为题写一篇小作文,字数不能少于45个单词。(提示词:There is …,There are…,in front of,above,behind,under,beside,flowers,trees,lake等)
【分析】该题要求以“My Nature Park”为题,来书写自己熟悉的自然公园,主要是描述公园里的景物及位置。
提示词汇:in front of above behind under beside flowers trees lake
重要句型:There is …,There are…
【解答】
My Nature Park
There is a nature park in front of my village. It's not big. There is a lake in the park. There are many fish in it. There are many trees beside the lake. There are many flowers under the trees. The air is nice and clean. I like the nature park.
我的自然公园
在村子的前面有一个自然公园,它不大。公园里有一个湖,里面有很多鱼。湖边有很多树,树底下开了很多花。那里的空气很清新,我喜欢自然公园。
【点评】注意学会运用课本的相关句型和重点单词进行写作 。
同学们,大家已经学了关于你的一周的英语知识,请你在你的小作文中,以“My weekend”为题向大家介绍你的周末是如何度过的,试试身手吧。
提示词:often wash clothes play football read books
【分析】该题以“My weekend”为题,来叙述自己周末的活动安排;时态可主要运用所学的一般现在时以及重要的动词短语进行描述即可。
重点词汇:often wash clothes play football read books
重点句型:I often…,Sometimes I…,In the morning, I usually…
【解答】
My weekend
On the weekend I often wash my clothes. Sometimes I play football. And I usually read books and do my homework. I like my weekend. And what about you?
我的周末
周末我经常洗衣服,有时候踢足球。我也经常读书和做作业。我喜欢我的周末,你的呢?
【点评】写作前,首先看清题目要求,确定作文的时态,根据课本所学的重点知识进行写作。
请以“My friend”为题,写一篇短文。字数不少于50字,并用上以下词语:
Amy a girl 13 America thin and short long hair big eyes small nose like maths
【解答】
My friend
I have a friend. Her name is Amy. She is 13 years old. She is from America. She is thin and short. She has long hair and big eyes. She has a small nose. She likes maths very much and she is good at it. And I like her very much. We are good friends.
【点评】本题考查描写人物,要做到语句通顺、条理清楚,具体内容用自己最熟悉的词(本题已给出)来组织,避免单词拼写错误。
以“This is my day”为题,写一写你一天的安排,不少于5个句子。
【分析】本题以“This is my day”为题,按时间顺序记叙一天发生的事情可用First、Next、Then、After that把全文连接起来。最后点题,照应题目。注意时态可以用一般现在时,也可以用一般过去时,可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥。
重点词汇:have breakfast 吃早餐 clean my room 打扫房间 play with sb. 和某人一起玩耍
【解答】
This is my day
Today is Sunday. First, I get up early at 6:30. I brush my teeth and wash my face. Next, I have my breakfast at 7:00. Then, I clean my room. After that, I play with my best friend. We go to the zoo together. This is my day. What about you?
我的一天
今天是星期天。首先,我六点半起床,刷牙和洗脸。接下来,七点钟吃早餐。然后,我打扫了我的房间。在那之后,我和我最好的朋友一起出去玩。我们一起去动物园。这是我的一天,你呢?
【点评】上下文之间可以适当使用连接词,如next,then等。
以“My Habits”为题,写一篇作文,运用所给单词,至少五句。
always often sometimes never read books go to the park watch TV fly a kite swim in winter do my homework
【解答】
My Habits
I have many habits. For example, I read books every day. I often go to the park and fly a kite. I sometimes do my homework at home. I never swim in winter. These are my habits. What about you?
我的习惯
我有很多习惯。例如我每天都会读书,我经常去公园放风筝,我有时在家做作业,我从来不在冬天游泳。这些是我的习惯,你的呢?
【点评】小学阶段中,英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力,学生必须掌握重要的单词拼写以及语法结构,要求语句通顺,语法、时态正确,书写规范。
写一写“My Holiday Plan”——我的假期计划。
所需词汇:want to travel go shopping swim like by plane mother father
【解答】
My Holiday Plan
The summer holiday is coming. I am very excited. Now let me tell you my plan.
I will travel to Sanya with my mother and father during this summer holiday. We will go there by plane. I will go shopping with my mother in the evening. During the day, we will go swimming. We will take many photos and buy many special gifts.
I believe we will have a good time there.
我的假期计划
暑假快到了,我感到非常兴奋,现在让我告诉你我的计划。
我将会在这个暑假期间和我的父母去三亚旅行。我们将坐飞机到达那里。我和妈妈准备晚上一起去购物。在白天,我们将会去游泳。我们会拍很多照片,还会买很多特别的礼物。
我相信我们会在那里度过美好的时光。
【点评】小学阶段,英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力,写作内容简单实用。学生需要掌握重点的单词的拼写以及句型结构,要求通顺,语法、时态正确,书写规范。
请以“My Favourite Holiday”为题写一写你最喜欢的节日,不少于5句话。
My Favourite Holiday
My favourite holiday is the Spring Festival. It's the Chinese New Year. For the Spring Festival, we buy new clothes, clean the doors, the windows and the floors. And we make dumplings. Kids get lucky money. That's interesting. I love the Spring Festival.
【分析】
1.全文通用一般现在时,以第一人称“我”展开叙事,动词用原形。
2.重点词组:the Spring Festival(春节)、 buy new clothes(买新衣服)、clean the doors(擦门)、clean the windows (擦窗户)、sweep the floor(打扫地板)、make dumplings(包饺子)、lucky money(压岁钱)
3.关键句型:
For the Spring Festival, we buy new clothes, clean the doors, the windows and sweep the floors. And we make dumplings. 因为春节我们可以买新衣服、擦门、擦窗户和打扫地板。而且我们还可以包饺子。
请你用四至六句话描述以前的自己与现在的差异。
提示:short tall thin fat…
I was …then. Now I am…
【分析】本文主要介绍“我”的过去与现在,描述自己过去的情况时,用一般过去时,介绍现在的自己时,用一般现在时 。
重点词汇:thin 瘦的
重点句型:I was naughty then. 那时我很淘气。
【解答】
I was thin then. Now I am fat. I was short then. Now I am tall. I was naughty then. Now I am cute.
过去我很瘦,现在我很胖;过去我很矮,现在我很高;过去我很调皮,现在我很可爱。
【点评】小学阶段,英文写作一般考查学生的语言运用能力,写作内容简单实用。学生需要掌握重点的单词的拼写以及句型结构,要求通顺,语法、时态正确,书写规范。
请你用四至六句话介绍你熟悉的城市,对比一下这座城市的过去和现在。
提示:famous old small big new now then
【分析】本文介绍熟悉的城市,介绍城市过去的情况时,时态用一般过去时,介绍城市现在的情况时,时态用一般现在时,人称用第三人称。
重点短语:an old city 一座古老的城市
重点句型: It is very famous.它非常著名。
【解答】
Guangzhou is an old city. It is very famous. The parks were small then. They are big now. The streets were old then. But They are new now.
广州是一个古老的城市,它非常有名。那时公园很小,现在它们很大。那时街道很旧,但是现在街道都很新。
【点评】学生需根据所提供的信息提炼写作主题,仔细构思写作结构,根据平时积累的词汇及句型,写出准确生动的语句。
请给你的好朋友写一封信,在信中你可以介绍一下你的家庭。要求:语法正确,语句通顺,不少于40个单词。
【分析】这里介绍自己的一些基本信息,时态用一般现在时,人称用第一人称。
重点词汇:a photo of…的照片。
重点句型:Do you want to know my family. 你想了解我的家人吗?
【解答】
Dear Amy
Do you want to know my family? Look, this is a photo of my family. The tallest man is my father. And I'm the shortest. My mother is thinner than my father. How about your family?
Yours,
Mary
亲爱的艾米:
你想认识我的家人吗?看,这是我家人的照片。那个最高的男士是我的爸爸。我是最矮的。我的妈妈比我的爸爸瘦。你的家人呢?
你的
玛丽
【点评】写作时多用简单句子,注意时态和语法的正确性,平时应多背单词和短语,积累词汇量。多读英语短文,增强语感。
假如你是老师,请你设计学校开放日的计划,至少写5句话。
The parents will visit our school on the Open Day. First...
【分析】
1.全文通用一般将来时(will+动词原形)
2.重点词组:the Open Day(开放日)、visit the classroom(参观教室)、the hall(大厅)、go to the playground(去操场)、play games(玩游戏)
3.关键句型,主要是陈述句(分三个部分)
First, the parents will visit the classroom. Mr.Zhang will tell them about the lessons.
首先,父母们会参观教室,张老师将会跟他们讲讲关于课程方面的情况。
Next, they'll go to the hall. The children will sing for their parents.
其次,他们将会去大厅,孩子们会唱歌给他们的父母听。
Finally, they'll go to the playground.
最后,他们将去操场。
【解答】
The parents will visit our school on the Open Day. First, the parents will visit the classroom. Mr.Zhang will tell them about the lessons. Next, they'll go to the hall. The children will sing for their parents. Finally, they'll go to the playground. The children will play games with their parents.
孩子们的父母将会在开放日来学校参观。首先,父母们会参观教室,张老师将会跟他们讲讲关于课程方面的情况;其次,他们将会去大厅,孩子们会唱歌给他们的父母听;最后,他们将去操场,孩子们将会和他们的父母一起做游戏。
快毕业了,你有什么话想对你的同学说?试着写一写吧。
【分析】本文是一篇应用文,可用写明信片的形式来表达毕业时对同学的感谢和祝福。时态可用一般现在时。
重点单词/短语:thank you appreciate wish hope
【解答】
Dear Xiaowang
Thank you for your help with my study and life in this 6 years in school. I appreciate the time that spent together with you. I hope that you will have a fresh new start in middle school. Wish you a good luck and happy life. Don't forget to connect with me often.
Yours,
Xiaoke
亲爱的小王:
感谢你这6年来在学校的学习和生活中给我的帮助。我非常珍惜曾和你在一起的时光。我希望你升入中学有一个全新的开始。祝愿你拥有好运和快乐的生活!不要忘了常联系!
你的好友
小柯
【点评】写作文前要审好题,尽量用简洁的语句去写作。注意语法正确、书写规范。
以“My hobbies”为题,写一篇小作文,要求不少于30个单词。
提示:I have some hobbies. I like… Hobbies can make me happy.
My hobbies
I have some hobbies. I like playing football, listening to music and drawing pictures. When I am at school, I often play football with my friends. I think playing football is very interesting and exciting. When I am at home,I like listening to music. Sometimes I like drawing pictures. At weekends, I like going shopping with my parents.
Hobbies can make me happy.Do you have any hobbies?
【分析】
根据开头句子“I have some hobbies.”可知,要使用第一人称来写这篇作文。hobbies是复数,所以就要写出自己的多个爱好;结尾句子“Hobbies can make me happy”含义是“爱好让我高兴”,所以要写的爱好必须是健康的、积极向上的!